Tweaked text to clarify some story elements

Author: 2walker2

Scripts/ModTemplate/CodexDispenser.cs

@@ -26,6 +26,7 @@ internal class CodexDispenser : MonoBehaviour
         bool animationStarted = false;
         bool complete = false;
         bool startedDispensing = false;
+        bool forcedActive = false;
 
         //Timing information
         float totalDuration = 57.5f; //68; //Total duration of the animation
@@ -102,7 +103,10 @@ void Update()
             if (Main.debugMode)
             {
                 if (Keyboard.current.lKey.isPressed && Keyboard.current.uKey.wasPressedThisFrame)
+                {
                     SetActive(true);
+                    forcedActive = true;
+                }
             }
 
             //Activate
@@ -119,7 +123,7 @@ void Update()
                 else
                 {
                     //Turn back off
-                    if (!sunWire.on || !populationWire.on || !technologyWire.on)
+                    if ((!sunWire.on || !populationWire.on || !technologyWire.on) && !forcedActive)
                     {
                         SetActive(false);
                     }
@@ -164,12 +168,14 @@ void SetActive(bool value)
                 coreComputer.DisplayEntry(1);
                 coreComputer.DisplayEntry(2);
                 coreComputer.DisplayEntry(3);
+                coreComputer.DisplayEntry(4);
             }
             else
             {
                 coreComputer.ClearEntry(1);
                 coreComputer.ClearEntry(2);
                 coreComputer.ClearEntry(3);
+                coreComputer.ClearEntry(4);
             }
 
             //Update material properties
@@ -298,7 +304,7 @@ IEnumerator CodecAnimation()
             probeParticles.Suppress(false);
 
             //Display last computer entry
-            coreComputer.DisplayEntry(4);
+            coreComputer.DisplayEntry(5);
 
             //Shatter the core
             coreTransform.localScale = Vector3.zero;

Scripts/ModTemplate/Main.cs

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ namespace AstralCodex
     public class Main : ModBehaviour
     {
         //DEBUG
-        public static bool debugMode = false; //CHANGE ON RELEASE
+        public static bool debugMode = true; //CHANGE ON RELEASE
 
         //Constant values
         public static string assetBundlePath = "planets/assets/astral_codex";

Walker.AstralCodex/AstralCodex.dll

@@ -1,17 +1,22 @@
 <NomaiObject xmlns:xsi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema-instance" xsi:noNamespaceSchemaLocation="https://raw.githubusercontent.com/xen-42/outer-wilds-new-horizons/main/NewHorizons/Schemas/text_schema.xsd">
 	<TextBlock>
 		<ID>1</ID>
-		<Text>We used the <![CDATA[<Color=orange>]]>Astral Codec<![CDATA[</Color>]]> to transmit every story, every piece of information we could record before the end. If you're reading this, our message must have made it through the vortex intact.</Text>
+		<Text>It's hard to believe that this message will ever be found. By the time anyone reads this, our entire universe, everything and everyone we've ever known, will have been dead for billions of years. That's a difficult thing to imagine.</Text>
 	</TextBlock>
 	<TextBlock>
 		<ID>2</ID>
 		<ParentID>1</ParentID>
-		<Text>Take it. Add your own stories and knowledge, and pass it onwards through the vortex in whatever way you can. Together we can keep the thread of memory alive.
-- Explorer</Text>
+		<Text>We used the <![CDATA[<Color=orange>]]>Astral Codec<![CDATA[</Color>]]> to transmit every story, every piece of information we could record before the end. If you're reading this, our message must have made it through the vortex intact.</Text>
 	</TextBlock>
 	<TextBlock>
 		<ID>3</ID>
 		<ParentID>2</ParentID>
+		<Text>Take it. Add your own stories and knowledge, and pass it onwards through the vortex in whatever way you can. Together we can keep the thread of memory alive.
+- Explorer</Text>
+	</TextBlock>
+	<TextBlock>
+		<ID>4</ID>
+		<ParentID>3</ParentID>
 		<Text>
 tests passed - codec safeguards disabled
 |                      \ | /                     |
@@ -21,8 +26,8 @@ core activated - insert device for download
 </Text>
 	</TextBlock>
 	<TextBlock>
-		<ID>4</ID>
-		<ParentID>3</ParentID>
+		<ID>5</ID>
+		<ParentID>4</ParentID>
 		<Text>
 codec downloaded successfully
 |     *     *    *       |    *     *    *     * |

Walker.AstralCodex/AstralCodex.pdb

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 	<TextBlock>
 		<ID>2</ID>
 		<ParentID>1</ParentID>
-		<Text>Anomaly solar distance: 35 kilometers. Anomaly inclination: 270 degrees.</Text>
+		<Text><![CDATA[<Color=lightblue>]]>Anomaly<![CDATA[</Color>]]> solar distance: 35 kilometers. <![CDATA[<Color=lightblue>]]>Anomaly<![CDATA[</Color>]]> inclination: 270 degrees.</Text>
 	</TextBlock>
 	<ShipLogConditions>
 		<RevealFact>

Walker.AstralCodex/planets/GiantsDeep_Body.nhcache

@@ -1,11 +1,13 @@
 {
     "$schema": "https://raw.githubusercontent.com/xen-42/outer-wilds-new-horizons/main/NewHorizons/Schemas/translation_schema.json",
     "ShipLogDictionary": {
-        "Symbols are scattered throughout the message written on the crystalline cairn.": "Symbols are scattered throughout the message written on the crystalline cairns."
+        "Symbols are scattered throughout the message written on the crystalline cairn.": "Symbols are scattered throughout the message written on the crystalline cairns.",
+        "An anomaly resting far below the plane of the solar system. A secondary probe from the Orbital Probe Cannon is found nearby.": "An anomaly resting far below the plane of the solar system. A Nomai probe is found nearby."
     },
     "DialogueDictionary": {
         "<![CDATA[<i>Recall the Strangers...</i>]]>": "<![CDATA[<i>Recall the inhabitants of the Stranger...</i>]]>",
         "The Strangers were archivists, preserving information at any cost. But their fear of the Eye led them to hide from the world inside a simulation of their own creation. Until one of them released the signal for the Nomai to find, and was imprisoned for their actions.": "The inhabitants of the Stranger were archivists, preserving information at any cost. But their fear of the Eye led them to hide from the world inside a simulation of their own creation. Until one of them released the signal for the Nomai to find, and was imprisoned for their actions.",
-        "An anomaly resting far below the plane of the solar system. A secondary probe from the Orbital Probe Cannon is found nearby.": "An anomaly resting far below the plane of the solar system. A Nomai probe is found nearby."
+        "Firing signal received, retrieving stored coordinates. Launching secondary probe. Secondary probe arrived at destination.": "Firing signal received, retrieving stored coordinates. Launching secondary probe. Secondary probe arrived at destination. Beginning primary probe launch sequence.",
+        "We used the <![CDATA[<Color=orange>]]>Astral Codec<![CDATA[</Color>]]> to transmit every story, every piece of information we could record before the end. If you're reading this, our message must have made it through the vortex intact.": "This probe is our final hope. We used the <![CDATA[<Color=orange>]]>Astral Codec<![CDATA[</Color>]]> to transmit every story, every piece of information we could record before the end. If you're reading this, our message must have made it through the vortex intact."
     }
 }