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content/cumulus-netq-52/More-Documents/Create a NetQ Simulation in DSX Air.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ To access DSX Air, you need an NGC account and organization. Refer to the {{<exl
 1. Click **New Simulation**, enter a name, select **Blank Canvas**, then click **Create**.  
 1. A blank canvas appears with a "System Palette" containing switches and servers. Drag and drop switches onto the canvas. Do not use the switch named `oob-mgmt-switch`.  
 1. Build your topology by placing switches on the canvas. Click on any switch to configure links between switches.
-1. Rename switches (e.g., `SN2100-1`, `SN2201-1`) by clicking each switch.  
+1. You can rename switches (e.g., `SN2100-1`, `SN2201-1`) by selecting a switch and editing its properties.  
 1. After you're finished configuring switches and links, enable OOB (out-of-band network) by selecting the toggle under your username.
 1. Click <img src="https://icons.cumulusnetworks.com/05-Internet-Networks-Servers/08-Upload-Download/upload-bottom.svg" height="18" width="18"/> **Export Simulation** to download the topology as a JSON file.  
 
@@ -29,21 +29,21 @@ To access DSX Air, you need an NGC account and organization. Refer to the {{<exl
 
 ```
 "netq-master": {
-  "memory": 65536,
   "cpu": 16,
+  "memory": 65536,
   "storage": 500,
   "os": "netq-5.2.0",
   "cpu_mode": "host-passthrough"
 }
 ```
-3. If a newer NetQ image is available, update the `os` value accordingly.
+If a newer NetQ image is available, update the `os` value accordingly. You can search for images hosted in DSX Air from the **Images** menu.
 
 
-## Create the Simulation Using the Updated JSON
+## Create the Simulation Using the Updated JSON File
 
 1. Click **New Simulation** and enter a name.  
-2. Select **JSON** as the simulation type and upload the JSON file you created in the previous section.  
-3. Enable **Apply ZTP Template**. Delete the contents and replace them with `ZTPScript.sh`. The ZTP script sets the OOB management server IP address to `192.168.200.1` and updates the default switch password from `cumulus` to `netq_123`:
+1. Select **JSON** as the simulation type and upload the JSON file you created in the previous section.  
+1. Enable **Apply ZTP Template**. Delete the contents and replace them with `ZTPScript.sh`. The ZTP script sets the OOB management server IP address to `192.168.200.1` and updates the default switch password from `cumulus` to `netq_123`:
 {{<expand "ZTPScript.sh">}}
 ```
 #!/bin/bash
@@ -82,9 +82,8 @@ exit 0
 ```
 {{</expand>}}
 
-4. Click **Create**. After the simulation is loaded, select the play button to start the simulation.
-
-5. It can take up to a minute to load the simulation. After the simulation is loaded, refresh the page to view it. You can drag the nodes using your mouse to reposition them.
+1. Click **Create**. After the simulation is loaded, select the play button to start the simulation.
+1. It can take up to a minute to load the simulation. After the simulation is loaded, refresh the page to view it. You can drag the nodes using your mouse to reposition them.
 
 After the ZTP script runs on all switches and NetQ fully boots, configure the NetQ agents and load the UI, as described in the next section.
 

content/cumulus-netq-52/Whats-New/_index.md

@@ -10,14 +10,14 @@ This page summarizes new features and improvements for the NetQ {{<version>}} re
 
 ## What's New in NetQ 5.2
 
-- Re-designed the {{<link title="Network Topology" text="network topology dashboard">}} so that you can visualize your network's topology according to system labels assigned to a device (beta)
-- Added ability to {{<link title="Disaster Recovery Using NFS" text="back up your NetQ data using an NFS server">}} for disaster recovery scenarios (beta)
-- Added a {{<link title="System Events Reference/#correlation-events" text="fault correlation system event">}} which groups of events linked to the same underlying issue and displays the association between host-based errors and devices within a network’s fabric (beta)
+- Re-designed the {{<link title="Network Topology" text="network topology dashboard">}} so that you can visualize your network's topology according to the system labels assigned to a device (beta)
+- You can now {{<link title="Disaster Recovery Using NFS" text="back up your NetQ data using an NFS server">}} for disaster recovery scenarios (beta)
+- NetQ now supports {{<link title="System Events Reference/#correlation-events" text="fault correlation system events">}} which group events linked to the same underlying issue and displays the association between host-based errors and devices within a network’s fabric (beta)
 - Added {{<link title="Validation Tests Reference/#adaptive-routing-validation-tests" text="adaptive routing validations">}} that verify configuration consistencies across switches in your network's fabric (beta)
-- Added support for node addition for NetQ NVLink + Ethernet combined mode deployments (beta)
+- You can now add nodes to your existing NetQ NVLink + Ethernet combined mode deployments (beta)
 - Added {{<link title="Validation Tests Reference/#roce-validation-tests" text="RoCE validations">}} that verify configuration consistencies across the entire network fabric, including switches, host NICs, and DPUs (beta)
 - Added support for Arm-based systems
-- Added ability to {{<link title="Create a NetQ Simulation in DSX Air" text="create NetQ simulations in DSX Air">}}
+- You can now {{<link title="Create a NetQ Simulation in DSX Air" text="create NetQ simulations">}} using the NVIDIA DSX Air platform
 - Updated the {{<link title="Cable Validations" text="Cable Validation Tool">}} to version 1.9
 - Added IPv6 support for {{<link title="Switch Management/#switch-discovery" text="switch discovery">}} operations
 
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ This page summarizes new features and improvements for the NetQ {{<version>}} re
     - Flow analysis (deprecated)
     - Validations: duplicate IP addresses, agents, VXLAN, MLAG bond VLAN consistency test (deprecated)
     - ECMP without adaptive routing (removed)
-    - High-availability scale cluster deployment for Ethernet only (removed). You can upgrade this deployment type using the upgrade instructions for NVLink + Ethernet combined mode.
+    - High-availability scale cluster deployment for Ethernet only (removed). You can upgrade this deployment type using the upgrade instructions for the NVLink + Ethernet combined mode deployment.
 
 ## Upgrade Paths