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doc/manual/source/release-notes-determinate/changes.md

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 <!-- Determinate Nix version 3.5.1 -->
 
-* Only run the test step after build completes by @grahamc in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#51](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/51)
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-* Remove flake-compat input by @lucperkins in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#52](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/52)
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 * Deprecate upgrade-nix command by @gustavderdrache in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#55](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/55)
 
-* Update flake.lock in light of recent change by @lucperkins in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#54](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/54)
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 * Lazy trees v2 by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#27](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/27)
 
 * Improve lazy trees backward compatibility by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#56](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/56)
 
 * Canonicalize flake input URLs before checking flake.lock file staleness, for dealing with `dir` in URL-style flakerefs by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#57](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/57)
 
 * Improve build failure error messages by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#58](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/58)
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-* Release v3.5.0 by @github-actions in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#59](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/59)
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-* @gustavderdrache made their first contribution in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#55](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/55)
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-* Dispatch release notes with a gh token by @grahamc in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#61](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/61)

doc/manual/source/release-notes-determinate/rl-3.5.1.md

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 * Based on [upstream Nix 2.28.3](../release-notes/rl-2.28.md).
 
 ## What's Changed
-* Only run the test step after build completes by @grahamc in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#51](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/51)
-* Remove flake-compat input by @lucperkins in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#52](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/52)
 * Deprecate upgrade-nix command by @gustavderdrache in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#55](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/55)
 * Update flake.lock in light of recent change by @lucperkins in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#54](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/54)
 * Lazy trees v2 by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#27](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/27)
 * Improve lazy trees backward compatibility by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#56](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/56)
 * Canonicalize flake input URLs before checking flake.lock file staleness, for dealing with `dir` in URL-style flakerefs by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#57](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/57)
 * Improve build failure error messages by @edolstra in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#58](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/58)
-* Release v3.5.0 by @github-actions in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#59](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/59)
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-## New Contributors
-* @gustavderdrache made their first contribution in [DeterminateSystems/nix-src#55](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/pull/55)
 
 **Full Changelog**: [v3.4.2...v3.5.1](https://github.com/DeterminateSystems/nix-src/compare/v3.4.2...v3.5.1)