website: minor edits

Author: huiwanpnnl

docs/guides/install_and_launch.md

@@ -15,7 +15,6 @@ and bundles can be found.
 
 Users who would like to **use** our tools installed at NERSC can find information in
 [this quickstart guide](/nersc/index.md).
-
 Users who would like to **install** their copy at NERSC can find an example
 [here](/nersc/users_installation.md).
 :::

docs/guides/simulation_data.md

@@ -8,9 +8,10 @@ generated using EAMv2, v3, and intermediate versions towards v4
 
 ## The horizontal dimension 
 
-Starting from version 2, QuickView has been generalized to handle all NetCDF
-variables on `pg2` cubed-sphere meshes regardless of what name is used
-for the horizontal dimension (e.g., `ncol` in EAM files and
+Starting from version 2, the ParaView Reader used in the tools
+has been generalized to handle all NetCDF
+variables on `ne*pg2` cubed-sphere meshes regardless of what name is used
+for the horizontal dimension (e.g., `ncol` in EAM files or
 `lndgrid` in ELM files). 
 
 Furthermore, QuickView2 has been generalized to visualize all variables
@@ -32,4 +33,7 @@ If a variable has an attribute named `missing_value` or `_FillValue`, the value
 is converted to NaN and ignored in the calculation of global averages and for
 the visualization.
 
-## File groups 
+## File groups
+
+:::danger FIXME - add contents
+::: 

docs/nersc/index.md

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ on separate pages:
 - How to install your own copy at NERSC: see [this example](./users_installation.md).
 - How to install the tools on a laptop or desktop computer: see [this page](/guides/install_and_launch).
 
-## Quickstart for users familiar with JupyterHub
+## Quickstart for NERSC users familiar with JupyterHub
 
 - Login to [JupytherHub](https://jupyter.nersc.gov/hub/login) and start a terminal window.
 
@@ -32,14 +32,13 @@ on separate pages:
 /global/common/software/m4359/quickcompare
 ```
 
-- After a few seconds, the terminal window will say "Use URL below to connect to the application:"
-  and show a URL starting.
-  A click on the URL will bring up the graphical UI in a brower window.
+- After a few seconds, the terminal window will say "Use URL below to connect to the application"
+  and show a URL. A click on the URL will bring up the graphical UI in a brower window.
 
 ::: tip Tip 1: Choosing a server for your analysis session.
-JupyterHub's control panel offers to NERSC users serveral different types of resources (nodes)
-for their computing and analyais needs, including, e.g., login node, shared GPU node,
-exclusive nodes, as explained in [NERSC's documentation](https://docs.nersc.gov/services/jupyter/reference/).
+JupyterHub's control panel provides NERSC users access to serveral different types of resources (nodes),
+including, e.g., login node, shared GPU node, exclusive nodes, as explained in
+[NERSC's documentation](https://docs.nersc.gov/services/jupyter/reference/).
 
 Since login nodes are shared by users and hence can get very busy or run into memory constraints,
 and since our tools can make use of GPUs for interactive rendering,
@@ -50,15 +49,15 @@ will be charged to your project's allocation.
 :::
 
 ::: tip Tip 2: The same executables work for all types of nodes.
-Regardless of which type of node is chosen, the same commands (as listed above)
-are used to launch our tools in the QuickView family.
+Regardless of which type of nodes a user choses in JupyterHub's control panel,
+the same commands (executables) are used to launch our tools in the QuickView family.
 :::
 
 ::: tip Tip 3: No need for manual `module load conda`.
-When one of the commands provided above is used to launch tools in the QuickView family,
-there is no need to manually apply `module load conda` or activate the environment
-that our tools are installed in. This is because the above-mentioned commands are
-in fact scripts that have included those steps.
+When the commands provided above are used to launch tools in the QuickView family,
+there is no need to manually apply `module load conda` or activate the conda environment
+in which the tools are installed. This is because the commands mentioned earlier
+on this page are in fact scripts that have included those steps.
 :::
 
 ::: warning ATTENTION: Shut down the server when you are done!

docs/nersc/users_installation.md

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ conda install conda-forge::e3sm_compareview
 
 At this point, the user should be able to use the following commands to launch
 the individual tools, assuming the conda environment has been activated.
-(But read the [next section](#recommended:-executable-shortcuts) if you expect to use the tools often.)
+(But read the [next section](#recommended-shortcuts) if you expect to use the tools often.)
 
 QuickView:
 ```
@@ -54,10 +54,10 @@ QuickCompare:
 quickcompare -p 0
 ```
 
-## Recommended: executable shortcuts
+## Recommended shortcuts
 
 Since the conda environment and tools are installed in custom paths, it will
-be useful to create shortcuts so that the apps can be lauched using very short 1-line commands.
+be useful to create shortcuts so that the tools can be lauched using very short 1-line commands.
 
 ### Setup step 1
 
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ In the `.bashrc` or `.cshrc` file in your home directory, add something like
 alias quickv='/global/cfs/projectdirs/m4359/tools/quickview2'
 alias quickc='/global/cfs/projectdirs/m4359/tools/quickcompare'
 ```
-### Using the apps through shortcuts
+### Using the tools through shortcuts
 
 After the two setup steps have been completed, the user should be able
 to launch the tools by simply typing `quickv` or `quickc`