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Refine English pilot wording
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assets/i18n/en.json

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"cards": {
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"sre": {
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"title": "SRE pilot",
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"text": "Bring traces/topology and incident history for one service domain. Sheaft builds a model, runs failure scenarios, and compares the result with known incidents or release risks."
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"text": "Start from trace data, topology and incident history for one service domain. Sheaft builds a model, runs failure scenarios, and compares the result with known incidents or release risks."
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"mobility": {
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"title": "Smart mobility pilot",
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"text": "Bring topology and telemetry for one corridor, tolling domain, parking/payment flow or sensorized mobility area. Sheaft identifies fragile components, missing observations and affected mobility journeys."
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"text": "Use topology and telemetry from one corridor, tolling domain, parking/payment flow or sensorized mobility area. Sheaft identifies fragile components, missing observations and affected mobility journeys."
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"science": {
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"title": "Chemistry/biology research pilot",
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"text": "Bring a reaction network, biological interaction graph or pathway model with perturbation scenarios. Sheaft identifies critical intermediates, fragile modules and robustness hypotheses."
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"text": "Use a reaction network, biological interaction graph or pathway model with perturbation scenarios. Sheaft identifies critical intermediates, fragile modules and robustness hypotheses."
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<div class="pilot-grid">
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<article class="pilot-card">
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<h3 data-i18n="pilot.cards.sre.title">SRE pilot</h3>
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<p data-i18n="pilot.cards.sre.text">Bring traces/topology and incident history for one service domain. Sheaft builds a model, runs failure scenarios, and compares the result with known incidents or release risks.</p>
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<p data-i18n="pilot.cards.sre.text">Start from trace data, topology and incident history for one service domain. Sheaft builds a model, runs failure scenarios, and compares the result with known incidents or release risks.</p>
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<article class="pilot-card">
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<h3 data-i18n="pilot.cards.mobility.title">Smart mobility pilot</h3>
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<p data-i18n="pilot.cards.mobility.text">Bring topology and telemetry for one corridor, tolling domain, parking/payment flow or sensorized mobility area. Sheaft identifies fragile components, missing observations and affected mobility journeys.</p>
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<p data-i18n="pilot.cards.mobility.text">Use topology and telemetry from one corridor, tolling domain, parking/payment flow or sensorized mobility area. Sheaft identifies fragile components, missing observations and affected mobility journeys.</p>
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<article class="pilot-card">
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<h3 data-i18n="pilot.cards.science.title">Chemistry/biology research pilot</h3>
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<p data-i18n="pilot.cards.science.text">Bring a reaction network, biological interaction graph or pathway model with perturbation scenarios. Sheaft identifies critical intermediates, fragile modules and robustness hypotheses.</p>
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<p data-i18n="pilot.cards.science.text">Use a reaction network, biological interaction graph or pathway model with perturbation scenarios. Sheaft identifies critical intermediates, fragile modules and robustness hypotheses.</p>
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