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[ai] Third Age section: remove Tumblr line and consolidate Notion paragraphs#156

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Closes #116

Parent plan

#99

What changed

  • Removed the dangling "Tumblr is worth mentioning here." line and its orphaned follow-up sentence at L704–706
  • Identified three separate paragraphs all making the same "Notion was the most influential" claim (L708–709, L713, L717)
  • Merged those three into one consolidated paragraph using the best phrasing from each: the "most influential" framing, the everyday-tool contrast with Gutenberg, and the touchstone/software-category point
  • Kept the Gutenberg timeline fact and the Microsoft Loop irony note as separate paragraphs — they are distinct points, not repetitions

How to verify

  • Open src/content/essays/block-party.mdx and search for "Tumblr" — should find zero occurrences in the Third Age section
  • Search for "most influential" — should appear exactly once in the section
  • Read lines ~692–712 in the updated file; the prose should flow without orphaned transitions

Notes

The edit is purely a tightening pass using existing text — no new writing was added. The Gutenberg comparison ("While Gutenberg served a small use case — writing blog posts") was drawn from L713 and folded into the consolidated paragraph to preserve the contrast that explains why Notion was influential.

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Remove dangling Tumblr lines and merge three repetitive "Notion was the
most influential" paragraphs into one coherent paragraph.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Sonnet 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Third Age section consolidation: remove Tumblr line and deduplicate Notion paragraphs (L692–718)

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