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Author: quinntracy

content/en/docs/refguide/modeling/integration/odata-services/consumed-odata-services/consumed-odata-service-requirements.md

@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ The most commonly used attribute types can be used in your app. The types of the
 | Enumeration                    | Enumeration |
 | Int64                          | Long |
 | String, Guid                   | String |
-| Collection                     | List (see [Collection Attributes](#collection-properties) below) |
+| Collection                     | List (see [Collection Properties](#collection-properties) below) |
 | (Other)                        | (Ignored) |
 
 ¹ In Studio Pro, Booleans cannot be null. If the service returns null, the app will use the value `false`.
@@ -125,20 +125,20 @@ Currently, the binary data can only be accessed by Java actions.
 
 ### Collection Properties {#collection-properties}
 
-Entity type properties that are a collection of a supported attribute type are supported through the use of a associated non-persistable entity. 
+{{% alert color="info" %}}
+Collection properties were introduced in [Studio Pro 11.6.0](/releasenotes/studio-pro/11.6/).
+{{% /alert %}}
+
+Entity type properties that are a collection of a supported attribute type are supported through the use of an associated non-persistable entity. 
 
-Take for example a `Product` entity type has an attribute `Tags` with type `Collection(Edm.String)`. The resulting domain model looks as follows:
+Take, for example, a `Product` entity type has an attribute `Tags` with type `Collection(Edm.String)`. The resulting domain model looks as follows:
 
 {{< figure src="/attachments/refguide/modeling/integration/odata-services/consumed-odata-service/collection-of-primitives.png" alt="A product entity with an associated ProductTag entity. The ProductTag entity has a Tag attribute" width="531" class="no-border" >}}
 
-For entity sets these properties are not supported. This means that they can only be used in parameters and return values of external actions.
+For entity sets, these properties are not supported. This means they can only be used in parameters and return values of external actions.
 
 Collection properties are not supported for services using OData v3.
 
-{{% alert color="info" %}}
-Collection properties were introduced in [Studio Pro 11.6.0](/releasenotes/studio-pro/11.6/).
-{{% /alert %}}
-
 ### Associations
 
 An OData v3 association can only be used if it has two ends.