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| label mas_compliment_language: | ||
| m 1wubsd "...that's.. I" | ||
| m 1dubsb ".. wow [player]" | ||
| m 5fubsb "You've made my heart skip a beat" | ||
| m 5fkbfb "maybe one day lanague will catch up to us, but till then I love you will have to do" | ||
| return "love" |
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Several notes on grammar, punctuation and voice.
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| label mas_compliment_language: | |
| m 1wubsd "...that's.. I" | |
| m 1dubsb ".. wow [player]" | |
| m 5fubsb "You've made my heart skip a beat" | |
| m 5fkbfb "maybe one day lanague will catch up to us, but till then I love you will have to do" | |
| return "love" | |
| label mas_compliment_language: | |
| m 1wubsd "That's... I..." | |
| m 1dubsb "...Wow, [player]!" | |
| m 5fubsb "You've made my heart skip a beat!" | |
| m 5fkbfb "Maybe one day the language will catch up to us, but till then, just 'I love you' will have to do~" | |
| return "love" |
| Event( | ||
| persistent._mas_compliments_database, | ||
| eventlabel="mas_compliment_language", | ||
| prompt="Human language doesn't have a word for how much I love you", |
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Personally, I think this can be a little shorter while retaining the message.
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| prompt="Human language doesn't have a word for how much I love you", | |
| prompt="No words can express how much I love you!", |
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compliment about there being no word to express how much the player loves Monika