early draft still

Author: Tim Berners-Lee

Documentation/VisualLanguage.html

@@ -46,13 +46,13 @@ <h1>A Visual Language for the Solid Databrowser</h1>
       everywhere forever.</p>
     <p> However, there is a default app, the databrowser which ships as a sort
       of basic operating system on many solid servers.&nbsp; Its language is
-      interesting for three reasons. Firstly, because it has&nbsp; - The
-      databrowser is a solid app, and so it is an example of the visual language
-      which ended up; secondly because it is useful for people designing for the
-      system to be able to design in the language, and thirdly because lots of
-      people have suggested that the databrowser UI could be improved, this may
-      give a focus for improving it! There are below as many questions asked and
-      unanswered as answered.</p>
+      interesting for three reasons. Firstly, because it has&nbsp; been thought
+      about: databrowser is a solid app, and so it is an example of the visual
+      language which it ended up with; secondly because it is useful for people
+      designing for the system to be able to design in the language, and thirdly
+      because lots of people have suggested that the databrowser UI could be
+      improved, this may give a focus for improving it! There are below as many
+      questions asked and unanswered as answered.</p>
     <p>Some of the challenges in the UI of solid are that in the Solid world any
       app can have any data about anything -- from linked data attitude that
       anything can say anything about anything.&nbsp; Also as everything has a
@@ -234,8 +234,7 @@ <h3>Labels: use the ontology</h3>
     <p>The data in the system is RDF data, and in RDF, classes (like <em>Person</em>)
       and properties (like <em>friend</em>) have URIs.&nbsp; There are files
       out there on the web with information about them, which includes a
-      human-readable label for the property.
-    </p>
+      human-readable label for the property. </p>
     <p>The labels are often in English, but on a good day, in many
       languages.&nbsp; This means that if the UI generates&nbsp; up its labels
       from the ontology you get potentially internationalization for free, if