chore: improve the pitch

Author: apsinghdev

apps/web/src/app/(main)/(landing)/pitch/page.tsx

@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                   </li>
                   <li>
                     <CornerDownRight className="size-5 flex-shrink-0 text-[#a472ea] mt-1" />
-                    <span>freedom to ask anything anytime.</span>
+                    <span>gives you the freedom to ask anything anytime.</span>
                   </li>
                 </ul>
                 <p className="text-text-secondary font-medium text-lg lg:text-xl pt-4 lowercase">
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                         and authentic help by a human (me) time to time.
                         <br></br>
                         <br></br>
-                        because a human has a limit on how many people they can
+                        because a human has a limit on how many people he can
                         help in a single day. and this defeats my main mission
                         statement with which i started in the first place.
                       </p>
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                         </span>
                       </p>
                       <p>
-                        if i go with this approach, i have to sacrifice those
+                        if i go with this approach, i'll have to sacrifice those
                         fancy dreams of raising millions, being on the front
                         page of magazines, having millions of users, etc.
                         <br></br>
@@ -313,16 +313,13 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                         effective forever.
                       </p>
                       <p className="font-bold underline decoration-brand-purple-light decoration-2">
-                        so i chose the #2 choice. why?
+                        so i choose the #2 choice. why?
                       </p>
                       <p className="text-brand-purple-light px-4 py-3">
                         because i&apos;d rather choose serving a hundred people
                         by providing them the best value in the market than
                         serving a million with an avg sub-standard product.
                       </p>
-                      <p className="font-bold">
-                        so i choose to stay small and stay effective.
-                      </p>
                       <p className="text-text-tertiary italic">
                         (for the same reasons, i&apos;ve rejected an{" "}
                         <Link
@@ -393,7 +390,7 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                   .
                 </p>
                 <p className="text-text-secondary font-medium text-lg lowercase">
-                  so that means, at max i can only guide{" "}
+                  so that means, at max i can only mentor{" "}
                   <span className="text-brand-purple-light">
                     417 investors a month
                   </span>{" "}
@@ -433,6 +430,8 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                     check out{" "}
                     <Link
                       href="/pricing#testimonials"
+                      target="_blank"
+                      rel="noopener noreferrer"
                       className="text-link hover:text-link-hover underline"
                     >
                       reviews
@@ -487,7 +486,7 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                       will the quality of your service reduce as you grow?
                     </h4>
                     <p className="text-text-secondary font-medium text-lg lowercase">
-                      never. this is the reason i&apos;m committed to only take
+                      never. this is the reason i&apos;m committed to only allow
                       417 investors a month. i can compromise with the growth,
                       revenue, etc, but never with the quality of the service.
                     </p>
@@ -519,8 +518,8 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                       <li className="flex items-start gap-3">
                         <CornerDownRight className="size-4 flex-shrink-0 text-[#a472ea] mt-1" />
                         <span>
-                          at the same time, your pro plan on opensox.ai will be
-                          active, and pro newsletters, pro filters to search
+                          at the same time, your pro plan on opensox.ai will get
+                          activated, and pro newsletters, pro filters to search
                           open source projects, and other pro features will be
                           unlocked.
                         </span>
@@ -530,8 +529,16 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                         <span>
                           after that, we&apos;ll do weekly sessions where you
                           can ask me anything, and we&apos;ll discuss one
-                          particular topic - last week&apos;s was &quot;learning
-                          tech from the first principles&quot;.
+                          particular topic - last week&apos;s was &quot;
+                          <Link
+                            href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=24CdxwRq0PI"
+                            target="_blank"
+                            rel="noopener noreferrer"
+                            className="text-link hover:text-link-hover underline"
+                          >
+                            learning tech from the first principles
+                          </Link>
+                          &quot;.
                         </span>
                       </li>
                       <li className="flex items-start gap-3">
@@ -578,6 +585,8 @@ const Pitch = () => {
                       i have done so far. and check the{" "}
                       <Link
                         href="/pricing#testimonials"
+                        target="_blank"
+                        rel="noopener noreferrer"
                         className="text-link hover:text-link-hover underline"
                       >
                         reviews