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case-studies.md

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     description: "Workshop, Consultancy"
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-## Good Work for Good People
+## Selected Work
 
 <div class="layout">
-  <p class="layout__item  lap-and-up-one-half">In no particular order, a
-     series of case studies covering a selection of recent work for
-     consultancy, engineering, and workshop clients.</p
-   ><p class="layout__item  lap-and-up-one-half">Don’t have time to read full case studies?
-     Feel free to <a href="mailto:csswizardry@gmail.com?subject=Let%E2%80%99s%20work%20together">send
-     me an email</a> and we can talk directly.</p>
+  <p class="layout__item  lap-and-up-one-half">A selection of recent case
+     studies spanning audits, consultancy, engineering, and training. Together,
+     they show how web performance work lands in the real world: faster
+     websites, stronger Core Web Vitals, more confident teams, and clearer
+     commercial returns.</p
+   ><p class="layout__item  lap-and-up-one-half">Every project is different,
+     but the underlying themes tend to be familiar: a slow site, an unclear
+     starting point, and a team that knows things could be better. If that
+     sounds like you, <a href="mailto:csswizardry@gmail.com?subject=Let%E2%80%99s%20work%20together">drop
+     me a line</a>.</p>
 </div>
 
+<p><a href="/contact/" class="btn  btn--positive">Add Yourself to the List…</a></p>
+
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   {% include css/components.feature-list.css %}
 </style>

services.md

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 ## How Can I Help?
 
-<blockquote class="pull-quote  pull-quote--context-alt" id="quote:addy-osmani"><p>Harry’s tailored
-workshop was nothing short of fantastic—a real eye-opener, helping our team
-level up their scalable CSS architecture skills. The entire team left learning
-something new, and to say that what was covered will have a large impact on our
-work is an understatement. We can’t recommend him enough.</p>
-<b class="source pull-quote__source"><a href="https://twitter.com/addyosmani">Addy
-Osmani</a>, Google</b></blockquote>
+<blockquote class="pull-quote  pull-quote--context-alt" id="quote:rich-fogarty">
+<p>Harry’s focused, practical approach allowed us to implement significant
+changes which improved our user experience and overall performance
+dramatically. I recommend him wholeheartedly.</p>
+<b class="source pull-quote__source">Rich Fogarty, <a href="http://concreteplayground.com">Concrete Playground</a></b></blockquote>
 
-I help companies of all shapes and sizes to assess, identify, and fix site-speed
-issues. Through a combination of audits, consultancy, and training, let’s find
-out what web performance means for your business, and how to ensure we’re on top
-of things.
+I help organisations **find, fix, and prevent** web performance issues. Whether
+you need a forensic audit, hands-on consultancy, team training, or ongoing
+support, the goal is the same: **faster websites**, stronger Core Web Vitals,
+and **clearer commercial returns** from the work we do. **I’m the man for the
+job.**
 
 <a href="/contact/" class="btn  btn--positive">{% include cta.md %}</a>