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Signed-off-by: Craig Osterhout <craig.osterhout@docker.com>

Author: craig-osterhout

content/manuals/offload/about.md

@@ -22,8 +22,6 @@ workflows:
 
 - Ephemeral cloud runners: Automatically provision and tear down cloud
   environments for each container session.
-- Hybrid workflows: Seamlessly transition between local and remote execution
-  using Docker Desktop or CLI.
 - Secure communication: Use encrypted tunnels between Docker Desktop and cloud
   environments with support for secure secrets and image pulling.
 - Port forwarding and bind mounts: Retain a local development experience even
@@ -71,29 +69,28 @@ Docker](https://www.docker.com/pricing/contact-sales/) to explore options.
 
 ### Session management and idle state
 
-To ensure fair access to cloud resources for all users, Docker Offload
-implements session management with idle state policies.
+Docker Offload implements session management and idle state policies to ensure
+fair use across all users.
 
 Here's how session management works:
 
 1. You start a new Docker Offload session. You can only have one session active
    at a time.
-2. You receive periodic prompts (every 3 hours) in the Docker Desktop Dashboard
-   to determine if you are still active. When the prompt appears, your state
-   becomes idle (lasting up to 5 minutes). In the idle state, the remote
-   connection is suspended and containers stop running.
-3. In the idle state, you can choose to:
-   - Do nothing or select **Cancel** in the prompt. Docker Offload remains in
-     the idle state.
-   - Select **Resume** in the prompt within 5 minutes. Your session becomes
-     active again with all containers, images, and volumes preserved. Return to
-     step 2.
-4. If the idle period exceeds 5 minutes, the session ends and any containers,
-   images, or volumes are deleted. Return to step 1 for a new clean session.
-5. After 8 hours from the start of your session, you will receive a prompt in
-   the Docker Desktop Dashboard to extend your session. At this time, you can
-   extend your session. If you do not extend your session, it ends and any
-   containers, images, or volumes are deleted.
+2. You receive periodic prompts (every 1 to 3 hours) in the Docker Desktop Dashboard
+   to determine if you are still active. When the prompt appears, you can choose to:
+   - Select **Resume** in the prompt to confirm you're still active and
+     continue your session.
+   - Do nothing, select **Cancel**, or dismiss the prompt. You have a
+     5-minute grace period. After the grace period, if you still haven't
+     responded, your session enters a 5-minute idle timeout period. During
+     either period, you can select **Resume** to continue your session and
+     preserve all containers, images, and volumes.
+3. If the idle timeout period exceeds 5 minutes without resuming, the session
+   is suspended (the remote connection is suspended and containers stop
+   running).
+4. After 8 hours of cumulative usage, the periodic prompts become more frequent.
+   If you do not respond to a prompt and the idle timeout expires, your session
+   ends and any containers, images, or volumes are deleted.
 
 ## What's next
 

content/manuals/offload/quickstart.md

@@ -31,8 +31,7 @@ This quickstart covers the steps developers need to get started with Docker Offl
 - You must have [Docker Desktop](/desktop/) installed. Docker recommends using
   the latest version of Docker Desktop to access the newest features and
   improvements in Docker Offload.
-- You must have access to Docker Offload. Your organization owner must subscribe
-  to Docker Offload for your organization.
+- You must have a Docker Business subscription and a Docker Offload subscription.
 
 ## Step 1: Verify access to Docker Offload
 

content/manuals/offload/usage.md

@@ -1,34 +1,33 @@
 ---
-title: Docker Offload usage and billing
-linktitle: Usage & billing
+title: Docker Offload billing and usage
+linktitle: Billing & usage
 weight: 30
-description: Learn about Docker Offload usage and how to monitor your cloud resources.
-keywords: cloud, usage, Offload
+description: Learn about Docker Offload billing and how to monitor your cloud resources.
+keywords: cloud, usage, Offload, billing
 ---
 
 {{< summary-bar feature_name="Docker Offload" >}}
 
 ## Manage billing
 
-For Docker Offload, you can view and configure billing on the **Docker Offload**
-page in [Docker Home Billing](https://app.docker.com/billing). On this page, you
-can:
-
-- Track your organization's Docker Offload usage
-- Add or change payment methods
+For Docker Offload, you can manage your subscription and billing in [Docker
+Home](https://app.docker.com/billing). If have a managed subscription, [contact
+Docker sales](https://www.docker.com/pricing/contact-sales/) to manage your
+subscription and billing.
 
 You must be an organization owner to manage billing. For more general
 information about billing, see [Billing](../billing/_index.md).
 
 ## Monitor your usage
 
-The **Offload activity** page in Docker Home provides visibility into how you
-are using cloud resources to run containers.
+The **Offload activity** page in Docker Home provides visibility into user
+activity and session metrics for Docker Offload.
 
 To monitor your usage:
 
 1. Sign in to [Docker Home](https://app.docker.com/).
-2. Select the account for which you want to monitor usage.
+2. If you have access to multiple organizations, select the organization
+   associated with your Docker Offload subscription.
 3. Select **Offload** > **Offload activity**.
 
 ### Overview metrics

data/summary.yaml

@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ Docker Build Cloud:
 Docker CLI OpenTelemetry:
   requires: Docker Engine [26.1.0](/manuals/engine/release-notes/26.1.md#2610) and later
 Docker Offload:
-  subscription: [Docker Offload]
+  subscription: [Docker Offload and Business]
   requires: Docker Desktop 4.65 and later
 docker compose alpha:
   availability: Experimental

layouts/_shortcodes/summary-bar.html

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
     "Available to all" "public"
     "Docker Hardened Images Enterprise" "/icons/dhi.svg"
     "Docker Hardened Images Select or Enterprise" "/icons/dhi.svg"
-    "Docker Offload" "cloud"
+    "Docker Offload and Business" "cloud"
   }}
   {{ $availabilityIcons := dict
     "Experimental" "science"