Void quest: Narrative update (#1756)

- Update void quest **overview description**
- Update character names, to appear in the dialogue balloon.
- Characters don't name each other when they don't know each other.
- Update dialogue lines. 

Resolves #1736

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Co-authored-by: Manuel Quiñones <manuq@endlessaccess.org>

Author: Stregoica777

scenes/quests/lore_quests/quest_002/1_void_runner/components/collected.dialogue

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # SPDX-FileCopyrightText: The Threadbare Authors
 # SPDX-License-Identifier: MPL-2.0
 ~ start
-Matilda: Take the story I told you to the town! That may be able to make the Void retreat for good.
+Moss The Monk: Take the story I told you, this Memory, to LinenVille! Hurry! Help them!
 => END

scenes/quests/lore_quests/quest_002/1_void_runner/components/monk.dialogue

@@ -3,18 +3,16 @@
 ~ start
 if _repelled:
 	=> go_forth
-{{npc_name}}: Ah! An unfamiliar face. I don't see so many new people these days.
-{{player_name}}: It wasn't easy to get here.
-{{npc_name}}: I'm sure. Ever since the Void came to this archipelago, the route has been treacherous.
-{{npc_name}}: It has been such a long time...
-{{player_name}}: That's why I'm here. Someone told me you knew countless stories, enough to restore this land to its former glory.
-{{player_name}}: Would you tell me a story now? About the old days, before the Void came?
+{{npc_name}}: Ah! An unfamiliar face. How did you get here?
+{{player_name}}: It wasn’t easy…
+{{npc_name}}: I’m sure. The Void poisoned our archipelago, and the route has been treacherous. But not only that…
+{{player_name}}: That’s why I’m here. Someone told me you knew stories that could restore this land, that they could heal it.
+{{player_name}}: Could you tell me one now, about the old days without this scary Void?
 {{npc_name}}: It would be my pleasure...
 do repel_void()
-{{npc_name}}: It felt good to share that story with you. It has been too long.
-{{player_name}}: And it has pushed back the Void!
+{{player_name}}: Oh! Look! Your story has pushed back the Void!
 => go_forth
 
 ~ go_forth
-{{npc_name}}: Go and see what you can find now that the Void has receded.
+{{npc_name}}: Indeed! Go and see what you can find now that it has receded.
 => END

scenes/quests/lore_quests/quest_002/1_void_runner/components/monk.tscn

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ size = Vector2(52, 50)
 [node name="Monk" type="CharacterBody2D"]
 motion_mode = 1
 script = ExtResource("1_et70a")
-npc_name = "Matilda"
+npc_name = "Moss The Monk"
 look_at_side = 0
 sprite_frames = ExtResource("2_8g08d")
 

scenes/quests/lore_quests/quest_002/1_void_runner/components/townie.dialogue

@@ -4,18 +4,17 @@
 if is_enemy_defeated():
 	=> success
 
-{{npc_name}}: [[Hi|Hello|Greetings]], {{player_name}}. It's not often we get visitors here.
-{{player_name}}: What's going on here? Just across the water I can see something strange.
-{{npc_name}}: A terrible force has come over our archipelago.
-{{npc_name}}: The only reason our home is safe is the stories we tell each other.
-{{npc_name}}: Two islands away lives a wise monk. She surely knows enough stories to restore this land, if only we could reach her!
+{{npc_name}}: An adventurer! It’s not often that we get visitors here.
+{{player_name}}: What’s going on? Across the water I can see something dark and mysterious.
+{{npc_name}}: A terrible force has come over our archipelago: that’s the Void.
+{{npc_name}}: Our homes are safe only because we tell each other stories. And this place, our dear LinenVille...
+{{npc_name}}: Two islands away lives a wise monk. Seek her! She knows enough stories to restore LinenVille. Sadly, I cannot reach her, but you might!
 {{player_name}}: How can I find her?
 {{npc_name}}: Cross the bridge, and follow the path.
-{{npc_name}}: But beware: once the Void senses you, you will be in grave danger. Move swiftly, {{player_name}}!
+{{npc_name}}: But beware: once the Void senses you, you will be in grave danger. Move swiftly!
 => END
 
 ~ success
-{{npc_name}}: We cannot thank you enough, {{player_name}}.
-{{npc_name}}: I've never seen anybody run so fast!
-{{npc_name}}: Please can you check if the old village north of the big forest is still there?
+{{npc_name}}: We cannot thank you enough!
+{{npc_name}}: Please, can you check if the old village north of the big forest is still there?
 => END

scenes/quests/lore_quests/quest_002/2_grappling_hook/components/buttons_collector.dialogue

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 # SPDX-FileCopyrightText: The Threadbare Authors
 # SPDX-License-Identifier: MPL-2.0
 ~ start
-Buttons Collector: Wait, I'm not going to hurt you!
-Buttons Collector: I'm here for the buttons. They don't serve any purpose... but it feels good picking them!
+Buttons Collector: Wait! Are you here for the buttons too? It sure feels good picking them!
 => END

scenes/quests/lore_quests/quest_002/2_grappling_hook/intro_start.dialogue

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 # SPDX-FileCopyrightText: The Threadbare Authors
 # SPDX-License-Identifier: MPL-2.0
 ~ start
-Matilda: Go take the thread, it will teleport you to the town.
+Moss The Monk: This thread of Memory will teleport you to the town.
 do animation_player.play(&"eat_floor")
 do animation_player.animation_finished
-Matilda: Hmmm.. the Void is blooming fast here.
-Matilda: You’d only be able to reach the town using a [b]grappling hook[/b]. That's how I managed to survive. Take mine.
+Moss The Monk: Oh, look! The Void is blooming fast here.
+Moss The Monk: You’ll need a [b]grappling hook[/b] to get to LinenVille. Take mine.
 do animation_player.play(&"show_input_hints")
 => END

scenes/quests/lore_quests/quest_002/3_void_grappling/components/void_grappling.dialogue

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # SPDX-FileCopyrightText: The Threadbare Authors
 # SPDX-License-Identifier: MPL-2.0
 ~ start
-Matilda: The town is near! But I sense that the Void has become more aggressive.
-Matilda: I fear that it will chase you again. Run and hook as fast as you can!
+Moss The Monk: The town is near, but I sense that the Void is somehow more powerful…
+Moss The Monk: I fear that it will chase you again. Run and hook as fast as you can!
 => END

scenes/quests/lore_quests/quest_002/4_closing_transition/components/closing_cinematic.dialogue

@@ -3,14 +3,14 @@
 ~ start
 do animation_player.play("enter")
 do animation_player.animation_finished
-Oh what do you have there? Is that a story from the monk?
-Tell us! Tell us!
+Flaxfred: Stranger! By any chance have you met a monk? Did she say anything? Please, tell us!
 do Transitions.do_transition(reveal)
-That was incredible! Thank you for sharing that story with us!
-Look! The Void is retreating!
+Flaxfred: That story... Thank you for sharing it!
+Flaxfred: The air! It’s perfume... Look! The Void is retreating!
 do animation_player.play("retreat")
 do animation_player.animation_finished
-Thank you so much for helping us! Take this thread.
+Flaxfred: Stranger, you have helped us more than you know!
+Flaxfred: It feels like LinenVille’s spirit has come back to us. Here: take this thread as a parting gift.
 do GameState.add_collected_item(InventoryItem.with_type(InventoryItem.ItemType.SPIRIT))
 do animation_player.play("leave")
 do wait(1.0)

scenes/quests/lore_quests/quest_002/quest.tres

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ animations = [{
 [resource]
 script = ExtResource("1_dlhxi")
 title = "A Void"
-description = "Our protagonist bolts from a growing blank that rolls across this land, stifling and consuming all that it cloaks."
+description = "StoryWeaver runs away from a growing emptiness that spreads across the land, smothering and swallowing everything it covers."
 first_scene = "uid://bm4ewr8p48x0i"
 sprite_frames = SubResource("SpriteFrames_l1xe8")
 animation_name = &"default"