LCORE-1356: Hermetic build demo slides#1331
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WalkthroughTwo new files are added to establish a Reveal.js presentation for Lightspeed Core's hermetic build approach. The HTML file provides the presentation structure and framework initialization, while the markdown file contains the slide content covering hermetic build processes, package types, CVE fix procedures, and proposed solutions. Changes
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docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.html (1)
2-2: Add document language for better screen-reader support.Add
langon the root<html>element.Suggested fix
-<html> +<html lang="en">🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
Verify each finding against the current code and only fix it if needed. In `@docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.html` at line 2, Add a lang attribute to the root HTML element (<html>) in the document to improve accessibility/screen-reader support; locate the root <html> tag in the file (the element shown as <html>) and update it to include an appropriate language code (e.g., lang="en" or the document's actual language).
🤖 Prompt for all review comments with AI agents
Verify each finding against the current code and only fix it if needed.
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In `@docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.html`:
- Line 5: Update the viewport meta tag to allow user zoom by removing the
user-scalable=no directive (e.g., adjust the existing meta viewport tag used in
the page). Locate the meta viewport element (the <meta name="viewport" ...> tag)
and either remove the user-scalable parameter or set it to allow scaling so zoom
is not disabled for accessibility.
In `@docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.md`:
- Line 26: The phrase "time consuming build" in the bullet item should be
corrected to the hyphenated compound adjective "time-consuming build"; locate
the text "time consuming build" in the docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.md
bullet and replace it with "time-consuming build" to improve clarity.
- Line 41: Replace the incorrect capitalization "PyPi" with the standard "PyPI"
in the markdown text; specifically update the bullet text "* Package in PyPi?"
to "* Package in PyPI?" so the package index name is correctly capitalized.
- Around line 47-50: Replace the informal/ambiguous phrases in the slide text —
specifically the "days (!!!)" ETA and "dunno ATM :(" pip package note — with
neutral, professional status wording; for example change the ETA to "ETA: TBD"
or "ETA: pending" and change the pip package line to "pip package: pending/under
investigation" (or "TBD") so the external-facing slides use precise, neutral
language.
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Nitpick comments:
In `@docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.html`:
- Line 2: Add a lang attribute to the root HTML element (<html>) in the document
to improve accessibility/screen-reader support; locate the root <html> tag in
the file (the element shown as <html>) and update it to include an appropriate
language code (e.g., lang="en" or the document's actual language).
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Remove user-scalable=no to avoid blocking zoom accessibility.
Line 5 disables user zoom, which is an accessibility blocker in browser/mobile contexts.
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- <meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1.0, maximum-scale=1.0, user-scalable=no">
+ <meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1.0">📝 Committable suggestion
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🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
Verify each finding against the current code and only fix it if needed.
In `@docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.html` at line 5, Update the viewport meta
tag to allow user zoom by removing the user-scalable=no directive (e.g., adjust
the existing meta viewport tag used in the page). Locate the meta viewport
element (the <meta name="viewport" ...> tag) and either remove the user-scalable
parameter or set it to allow scaling so zoom is not disabled for accessibility.
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Hyphenate compound adjective for clarity.
Line 26 should use “time-consuming build”.
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[grammar] ~26-~26: Use a hyphen to join words.
Context: ...es (sdist) * With sources, but with time consuming build * Without sources (binar...
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🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
Verify each finding against the current code and only fix it if needed.
In `@docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.md` at line 26, The phrase "time
consuming build" in the bullet item should be corrected to the hyphenated
compound adjective "time-consuming build"; locate the text "time consuming
build" in the docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.md bullet and replace it with
"time-consuming build" to improve clarity.
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| ## How to fix CVE? | ||
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| * Package in PyPi? |
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Fix package index capitalization (PyPI).
Line 41 uses PyPi; the standard name is PyPI.
🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
Verify each finding against the current code and only fix it if needed.
In `@docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.md` at line 41, Replace the incorrect
capitalization "PyPi" with the standard "PyPI" in the markdown text;
specifically update the bullet text "* Package in PyPi?" to "* Package in PyPI?"
so the package index name is correctly capitalized.
| - ETA - days (!!!) | ||
| * `pip` package | ||
| - dunno ATM :( | ||
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Use neutral/professional wording for external-facing slides.
Lines 47–50 (days (!!!) and dunno ATM :() read informal and ambiguous; please replace with precise neutral status wording.
Suggested wording
-* Package in RH Python registry
- - ask on forum-aipcc
- - exact workflow to be defined + refined
- - ETA - days (!!!)
+* Package in RH Python registry
+ - ask on forum-aipcc
+ - exact workflow to be defined and refined
+ - ETA: days
-* `pip` package
- - dunno ATM :(
+* `pip` package
+ - workflow TBD📝 Committable suggestion
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Carefully review the code before committing. Ensure that it accurately replaces the highlighted code, contains no missing lines, and has no issues with indentation. Thoroughly test & benchmark the code to ensure it meets the requirements.
| - ETA - days (!!!) | |
| * `pip` package | |
| - dunno ATM :( | |
| - ETA: days | |
| * `pip` package | |
| - workflow TBD | |
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[style] ~47-~47: Using many exclamation marks might seem excessive (in this case: 3 exclamation marks for a text that’s 707 characters long)
Context: ... be defined + refined - ETA - days (!!!) * pip package - dunno ATM :( --...
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🤖 Prompt for AI Agents
Verify each finding against the current code and only fix it if needed.
In `@docs/demos/lcore/cve_hermetic_build.md` around lines 47 - 50, Replace the
informal/ambiguous phrases in the slide text — specifically the "days (!!!)" ETA
and "dunno ATM :(" pip package note — with neutral, professional status wording;
for example change the ETA to "ETA: TBD" or "ETA: pending" and change the pip
package line to "pip package: pending/under investigation" (or "TBD") so the
external-facing slides use precise, neutral language.
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