editorial review

Author: Magda Sulik

docs/marketplace-docs/guides/moodle/index.md

@@ -36,9 +36,9 @@ Moodle is the most widely used open source learning management system. It is aim
 
 - **Email address** *(required)*: Enter the email address you want to use for generating the SSL certificates and configuring the server and DNS records.
 
-- **Moodle Admin Username** *(required)*: Enter a Admin username for the Moodle admin account.
+- **Moodle Admin Username** *(required)*: Enter an admin username for the Moodle admin account.
 
-- **Moodle Database Username** *(required)*: Enter a Database username for the Moodle database admin.
+- **Moodle Database Username** *(required)*: Enter a database username for the Moodle database admin.
 
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@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ This returns passwords that were automatically generated when the instance was d
 
 To access your Moodle instance, Open a browser and navigate to your Linode rDNS domain `https://203-0-113-0.ip.linodeusercontent.com`. Replace `https://203-0-113-0.ip.linodeusercontent.com` with your [Linode's RDNS domain](/docs/products/compute/compute-instances/guides/manage-ip-addresses/#viewing-ip-addresses).
 
-From there, you can login by clicking the box on the top right of the page. Once you see the login page, you can enter the admin username entered at deployment as the *username* and the *password* that can be obtained in the credentials file.
+From there, you can log in by clicking the box on the top right of the page. On the login page, enter the admin username you provided during the app deployment and the password stored in the credentials file.
 
 Now that you’ve accessed your dashboard, checkout [the official Moodle documentation](https://docs.moodle.org/311/en/Main_page) to learn how to further configure your instance.
 

docs/marketplace-docs/guides/pihole/index.md

@@ -67,12 +67,12 @@ This returns passwords that were automatically generated when the instance was d
 
 1.  Open your web browser and navigate to `http://[domain]/admin`, where *[domain]* can be replaced with the custom domain you entered during deployment, your Compute Instance's rDNS domain (such as `192-0-2-1.ip.linodeusercontent.com`), or your IPv4 address. See the [Managing IP Addresses](/docs/products/compute/compute-instances/guides/manage-ip-addresses/) guide for information on viewing IP addresses and rDNS.
 
-    The Pi-Hole dashboard should now be displayed.
+    The Pi-Hole dashboard opens.
 
     ![Screenshot of the Pi-hole dashboard](pihole-dashboard.png)
 
-1.  To log yourself in and access most of Pi-hole's features, click the **Login** link on the left menu. Enter the Pi-hole user password that is found in your credentials file.
+1.  To log in and access most of Pi-hole's features, in the main menu, click **Login**. Enter the Pi-hole user password that is found in your credentials file.
 
-Now that you’ve accessed your dashboard, check out [the official Pi-hole documentation](https://docs.pi-hole.net/) to learn how to further use your Pi-hole instance.
+Check out [the official Pi-hole documentation](https://docs.pi-hole.net/) to learn how to further use your Pi-hole instance.
 
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