proofreading task for ms-windows

Author: OlufunkeMoronfolu

content/en/docs/deployment/on-premises-design/ms-windows/_index.md

@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ This document describes the installation and configuration of Mendix software on
 
 ## Prerequisites {#Prerequisites}
 
-To set up an environment to run Mendix applications, you will need to install the Mendix software. For each Mendix application that will be run, a separate user (service) account is required. This section presents an overview of the setup.
+To set up an environment to run Mendix applications, you will need to install the Mendix software. You must also create a separate user (service) account for each Mendix application you plan to run.
 
-{{< figure src="/attachments/deployment/on-premises-design/ms-windows/18580733.png" >}}
+{{< figure src="/attachments/deployment/on-premises-design/ms-windows/ms-windows-setup.png" >}}
 
 Before starting this how-to, make sure you have the following prerequisites:
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Before starting this how-to, make sure you have the following prerequisites:
 * MS IIS URL Rewrite installed (for more information, see [URL Rewrite](https://www.iis.net/downloads/microsoft/url-rewrite))
 * Java Runtime, version depending on your Mendix Server Distribution. See [System Requirements](/refguide/system-requirements/#java) for more information. 
 * The Mendix Deployment Archive (MDA) of your Mendix project
-* The Mendix server distribution corresponding with your Mendix Studio Pro version (see the [Mendix Marketplace](https://marketplace.mendix.com/link/studiopro/))
+* The Mendix server distribution corresponding to your Mendix Studio Pro version (see the [Mendix Marketplace](https://marketplace.mendix.com/link/studiopro/))
 * A database with sufficient security rights
 
     * Suitable database servers are MariaDB, MS SQL Server, MySQL, Oracle Database and PostgreSQL. See [System Requirements](/refguide/system-requirements/#databases) for more information
@@ -52,20 +52,17 @@ Before starting this how-to, make sure you have the following prerequisites:
 To download and install the Mendix Service Console, follow these steps:
 
 1. Download the latest version of the [Mendix Service Console](https://marketplace.mendix.com/link/component/223425) module from the Marketplace.
-
-    {{< figure src="/attachments/deployment/on-premises-design/ms-windows/service_console_download.png" >}}
-
 2. Install the Mendix Service Console by following the installation wizard.
 
-3. Start the Mendix Service Console after completing the installation. The first time you launch the application, a popup will be shown (it will always be shown if no valid location is configured for the apps and server files):
+3. Start the Mendix Service Console after completing the installation. The first time you launch the application, you will see a dialog box (it will always be shown if no valid location is configured for the apps and server files):
 
     {{< figure src="/attachments/deployment/on-premises-design/ms-windows/service_console_first_run.png" >}}
 
 4. Click **Yes**. The **Preferences** dialog box will be shown:
 
     {{< figure src="/attachments/deployment/on-premises-design/ms-windows/18580730.png" >}}
 
-5. In the **Preferences** dialog box, enter a **Location of apps and server files**. This location is used for storing your app files and Mendix server files. Mendix recommends using a directory:
+5. In the **Preferences** dialog box, enter the **Location of apps and server files**. This location is used for storing your app files and Mendix server files. Mendix recommends using a directory:
 
     * that is NOT on the system partition
     * where you can easily control the security rights
@@ -101,7 +98,7 @@ To deploy a Mendix app using the Mendix Service Console, follow these steps:
 
     {{< figure src="/attachments/deployment/on-premises-design/ms-windows/service_console_selectapp.png" >}}
 
-6. Now select the **MDA** file that was [created in Studio Pro](/refguide/create-deployment-package-dialog/) and contains your application logic. After the installation of your MDA file, you will see which Mendix server (Mendix Runtime) version is needed.
+6. Now select the **MDA** file that was [created in Mendix Studio Pro](/refguide/create-deployment-package-dialog/) and contains your application logic. After the installation of your MDA file, you will see which Mendix server (Mendix Runtime) version is needed.
 
 7. Configure the **Database Settings**:
 
@@ -137,7 +134,7 @@ In order to use the proxy functionality within ARR, you need to enable this feat
 To create a website, follow these steps:
 
 1. Open the IIS Manager.
-2. In the **Connections** pane, click the **Sites** node in the tree. If **Default Website** or any other website is present under **Sites**, please check if it is being used.
+2. In the **Connections** pane, click the **Sites** node in the tree. If **Default Website** or any other website is present under **Sites**, check if it is being used.
 3. Right-click **Sites** and select **Add Web Site**.
 4. In the **Add Web Site** dialog box, enter a friendly name for your web site in the **Web site name** field.
 5. In the **Physical path** field, enter the physical path of your application-project-web folder (for example, *D:\Mendix\Apps\Application\Project\Web*).
@@ -203,7 +200,11 @@ Rule | Name | Pattern | Rewrite URL
 10 | p | `^(p/)(.*)` | `http://localhost:8080/{R:1}{R:2}`
 11 | manifest | `^(manifest.webmanifest)(.*)` | `http://localhost:8080/{R:1}{R:2}`
 
-Follow the instructions below and replace *[Name]* with the name of the rule in the table above, *[Pattern]* with the regular expression pattern, and *[Rewrite URL]* with the Rewrite URL. Note that some patterns contain a trailing slash, `/`, when they need to point to an exact path (for example, `/ws-doc/mydoc/1234`).
+Follow the instructions below and replace *[Name]* with the name of the rule in the table above, *[Pattern]* with the regular expression pattern, and *[Rewrite URL]* with the Rewrite URL.
+
+{{% alert color="info" %}}
+Some patterns contain a trailing slash, `/`, when they need to point to an exact path (for example, `/ws-doc/mydoc/1234`).
+{{% /alert %}}
 
 1. Open the IIS Manager and navigate to the website you want to manage.
 2. In the **Features View**, double-click **URL Rewrite**.
@@ -214,7 +215,7 @@ Follow the instructions below and replace *[Name]* with the name of the rule in
 7. Set **Using** to *Regular Expressions*.
 8. In the **Pattern** field, enter `[Pattern]`.
 9. In the **Action** section, set **Action type** to *Rewrite*.
-10. In the **Rewrite URL** field, enter `[Rewrite URL]` (in the rules above this is always `http://localhost:8080/{R:1}{R:2}`).
+10. In the **Rewrite URL** field, enter `[Rewrite URL]` (in the rules above, this is always `http://localhost:8080/{R:1}{R:2}`).
 11. Ensure the **Append query string** checkbox is set to *true* (checked).
 12. Click **Apply**.
 13. Click **Back to Rules**.