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modules/rosa-govcloud-fedramp-signup.adoc

@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ To access {product-title} in AWS GovCloud, you must sign up for a Red{nbsp}Hat F
 .Procedure
 . Navigate to link:https://console.redhat.com/openshift/create/rosa/govcloud[the ROSA GovCloud access request form].
 . Complete the access request form.
-. Click *Submit* to sign up. You will receive a _Submission confirmation_.
+. Click *Submit* to sign up. You receive a _Submission confirmation_.
 +
-Red{nbsp}Hat's confirmed stateside support team will contact you through email for the following information:
+Red{nbsp}Hat's confirmed stateside support team contacts you through email for the following information:
 +
 * *Admin details* to include your _organization name_, _administrator first and surname_ and _administrator email_.
 * *User authentication* option to the FedRAMP {hybrid-console-second} from one of the following two options:

modules/rosa-govcloud-privatelink-create-cluster.adoc

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ $ rosa create cluster --private-link --cluster-name=<cluster-name> [--machine-ci
 $ rosa create cluster --private-link --multi-az --cluster-name=<cluster-name> [--machine-cidr=<VPC CIDR>/16] --subnet-ids=<private-subnet-id1>,<private-subnet-id2>,<private-subnet-id3>
 ----
 
-. Enter the following command to check the status of your cluster. During cluster creation, the `State` field from the output will change from `pending` to `installing`, and finally to `ready`.
+. Enter the following command to check the status of your cluster. During cluster creation, the `State` field from the output changesfrom `pending` to `installing`, and finally to `ready`.
 +
 [source,terminal]
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modules/rosa-govcloud-support-ticket.adoc

@@ -11,6 +11,6 @@ To get access to open a support ticket, complete the following steps.
 .Procedure
 
 . If you need to create an account, contact fedramp-css@openshiftusgov.com.
-. After you receive access, navigate to link:https://redhatgov.servicenowservices.com/css[the Red Hat GovCloud support portal].
+. After you receive access, navigate to the link:https://redhatgov.servicenowservices.com/css[Red Hat GovCloud support portal].
 . Click *Create Case* and complete the required information.
 . Click *Submit*.