refactor: reword some sentences (#62)

Author: levkk

docs/enterprise_edition/insights/.pages

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+title: Query insights
+nav:
+  - index.md
+  - ...

docs/enterprise_edition/insights/active_queries.md

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 # Active queries
 
-PgDog Enterprise provides a real-time view into queries currently executing on its PostgreSQL connections. This is accessible in two places:
+PgDog provides a real-time view into queries currently executing on its PostgreSQL connections. This is accessible in two places:
 
 1. [`SHOW ACTIVE_QUERIES`](#admin-database) admin command
 2. [Activity](#web-ui) view in the dashboard
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 ### Parameters
 
-If your application is using prepared statements (or just placeholders in queries), the parameters for these queries are not shown and will not be sent to the control plane. 
+If your application is using prepared statements (or just placeholders in queries), the parameters for these queries are not shown and will not be sent to the control plane.
 
 If your application is using simple statements (parameters in query text), PgDog will normalize the queries, removing values and replacing them with parameter symbols (e.g., `$1`). This is to make sure no sensitive data leaves the database network.

docs/enterprise_edition/insights/errors.md

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 # Errors
 
-PgDog Enterprise tracks query errors returned by PostgreSQL, providing a real-time view into recently encountered issues like syntax errors, missing columns, or lock timeouts.
+PgDog tracks query errors returned by PostgreSQL, providing a real-time view into recently encountered issues like syntax errors, missing columns, or lock timeouts.
 
 ## Admin database
 

docs/enterprise_edition/insights/index.md

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 # Query insights
 
-PgDog Enterprise provides visibility into all queries that it serves, which allows it to analyze and report how those queries perform, in real-time.
+PgDog provides visibility into all queries that it serves, which allows it to analyze and report how those queries perform, in real-time.
 
 ## Telemetry
 
-PgDog Enterprise collects the following telemetry:
+PgDog collects and displays the following telemetry:
 
 | Telemetry | Frequency | Description |
 |-|-|-|

docs/enterprise_edition/insights/statistics.md

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 # Query statistics
 
-PgDog Enterprise collects detailed per-query statistics, similar to PostgreSQL's `pg_stat_statements`, with extra information useful for debugging application performance.
+PgDog collects detailed per-query statistics, similar to PostgreSQL's `pg_stat_statements`, with extra information useful for debugging application performance. These are viewable and searchable in the [control plane UI](../control_plane/index.md) and in the [admin database](#admin-database).
 
 ## How it works