PEP 752: Address feedback, round 6

Author: ofek

peps/pep-0752.rst

@@ -235,11 +235,11 @@ detected when any existing namespace starts with the proposed namespace.
 Uploads
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-If the following criteria are all true for a given upload:
+If the name of a package being uploaded matches a reserved namespace and either
+of the following criteria are true:
 
 1. The project does not yet exist.
-2. The name matches a reserved namespace.
-3. The project is not owned by an organization with an active grant for the
+2. The project is not owned by an organization with an active grant for the
    namespace.
 
 Then the upload MUST fail with a 403 HTTP status code.