Packaging community member -> voting member

Author: pradyunsg

peps/pep-0772.rst

@@ -188,13 +188,13 @@ Election of the council
 
 A council election consists of two phases:
 
-* Phase 1: A member of the Packaging community (defined later in this document)
-  can self-nominate themselves for the council elections.
-* Phase 2: Each Packaging community member can assign zero to five stars to
-  each candidate. Voting is performed anonymously. The outcome of the vote is
-  determined using the `STAR voting system`_, modified to use the `Multi-winner
-  Bloc STAR`_ approach. If a tie occurs, it may be resolved by mutual agreement
-  among the candidates, or else the winner will be chosen at random.
+* Phase 1: A voting member (defined later in this document) can self-nominate
+  themselves for the council elections.
+* Phase 2: Each voting member can assign zero to five stars to each candidate.
+  Voting is performed anonymously. The outcome of the vote is determined using
+  the `STAR voting system`_, modified to use the `Multi-winner Bloc STAR`_
+  approach. If a tie occurs, it may be resolved by mutual agreement among the
+  candidates, or else the winner will be chosen at random.
 
 Each phase should last two weeks.
 
@@ -266,25 +266,24 @@ During a council term, if changing circumstances cause this rule to be broken
 council members must resign to remedy the issue, and the resulting vacancies
 can then be filled as normal.
 
--------------------
-Packaging community
--------------------
+--------------
+Voting members
+--------------
 
 Responsibility
 ==============
 
-Packaging community members participate in formal votes to elect the Packaging
-Council.
+Voting members participate in formal votes to elect the Packaging Council.
+
 
 Processes
 =========
 
 Initial membership
 ------------------
 
-Initial membership in the Packaging community will include anyone who has taken
-the time to formalise their participation in the Packaging community. This
-includes:
+Initial set of voting members will include anyone who has taken the time to
+formalise their participation in the packaging community. This includes:
 
 * PyPA members: Anyone with the triage bit or commit bit, or at least one
   project in the PyPA organisation.
@@ -300,14 +299,14 @@ includes:
 Adding a new member
 -------------------
 
-Members are added to the Packaging community by a simple majority vote by the
-current membership. Quorum for adding new members is 50%.
+New voting members are added by a simple majority vote by the current
+membership. Quorum for adding new members is 50%.
 
-A vote to add a new member is triggered when a Packaging community member calls
-for one publicly on an appropriate communication channel, and another Packaging
-community member seconds the call within two weeks.
+A vote to add a new member is triggered when a voting member calls for one
+publicly on an appropriate communication channel, and another voting member
+seconds the call within two weeks.
 
-The vote lasts for two weeks. Packaging community members vote for or against.
+The vote lasts for one week. Each member can vote for or against.
 
 Removal of a member
 -------------------
@@ -319,28 +318,28 @@ re-submit their intention to resume their participation to the Packaging
 Council in writing.
 
 In exceptional circumstances, it may be necessary to remove someone from the
-Packaging community against their will (for example: egregious and ongoing code
-of conduct violations). A Packaging community member may be removed by a
-two-thirds majority vote by the Packaging Council (in practice: 4:1 for a
-council with five members).
+voting members against their will (for example: egregious and ongoing code of
+conduct violations). A voting member may be removed by a two-thirds majority
+vote by the Packaging Council (in practice: 4:1 for a council with five
+members).
 
-If the relevant Packaging community member is also on the Packaging Council,
-then they can participate in the vote. They are removed from the Packaging
-Council if the vote removes them from the Packaging community. The vacancy is
-filled as per the process for filling vacancies in the Packaging Council.
+If the relevant voting member is also on the Packaging Council, then they can
+participate in the vote. They are removed from the Packaging Council if the
+vote removes them as a voting member. The vacancy is filled as per the process
+for filling vacancies in the Packaging Council.
 
 Vote of no confidence
 ---------------------
 
-In exceptional circumstances, the Packaging community may remove a sitting
-council member, or the entire council, via a vote of no confidence.
+In exceptional circumstances, the voting members may remove a sitting council
+member, or the entire council, via a vote of no confidence.
 
-A no-confidence vote is triggered when a Packaging community member calls for
-one publicly on an appropriate public communication channel, and another
-Packaging community member seconds the call within two weeks.
+A no-confidence vote is triggered when a voting member calls for one publicly
+on an appropriate public communication channel, and another voting member
+seconds the call within two weeks.
 
-The vote lasts for two weeks. Packaging community members vote for or against.
-If at least two thirds of voters express a lack of confidence, then the vote
+The vote lasts for two weeks. Each voting member votes for or against. If at
+least two thirds of voters express a lack of confidence, then the vote
 succeeds. Quorum for a vote of no confidence is 50%.
 
 There are two forms of no-confidence votes: those targeting a single member,
@@ -355,8 +354,8 @@ Changing the governance
 -----------------------
 
 Changes to this governance model, once it is accepted, will require at least a
-two-thirds majority of votes cast in a Packaging community vote which should be
-open for two weeks.
+two-thirds majority of votes cast in a vote, which should be open for two
+weeks.
 
 ==============
 Rejected Ideas
@@ -445,7 +444,7 @@ Packaging Council will meet on a regular basis (twice a month).
 * Coordinate with the Steering Council on PEPs that need input from both
   groups.
 * Coordinate with PyPA on their ongoing work to support individual projects.
-* Delegate to domain experts or working groups in the Packaging community, for
+* Delegate to domain experts or working groups in the packaging community, for
   initiatives/PEPs with a niche focus (analogous to how the Steering Council
   sends certain PEPs to the C API working group).
 * Scope out work that might best be done by hiring someone and then work with