RHIDP-12524: short description was flagged by CQA check. revised

Author: rh-tokeefe

modules/observability_evaluate-project-health-using-scorecards/proc-configure-aggregated-scorecard-kpis-to-monitor-the-health-of-multiple-applications.adoc

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 = Configure aggregated Scorecard KPIs to monitor the health of multiple applications
 
 [role="_abstract"]
-Configure drill-downs to quickly identify trends across your application portfolio and analyze which specific applications require attention. Monitoring collective health across a portfolio allows team leads and managers to identify patterns, prioritize issues, and take action on applications that are failing or need intervention.
+Configure the {product} Scorecard plugin to enable drill-down capabilities. This allows you to investigate the specific catalog entities and metrics that contribute to aggregated KPI scores, helping to identify and troubleshoot failing applications across a portfolio.
 
 .Prerequisites
 
@@ -57,8 +57,8 @@ scorecard:
 +
 [source,csv]
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-p, role:default/team_lead, scorecard.metric, read, allow
-p, role:default/team_lead, catalog.entity, read, allow
+p, role:default/team_lead, scorecard.metric.read, read, allow
+p, role:default/team_lead, catalog.entity.read, read, allow
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 .Verification