fix(posts): update "Rhythmism"

Post: 2024-02-18-rhythmism.md

Remove Replit and improve grammar

Author: remarkablemark

_posts/2024/2024-02-18-rhythmism.md

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 Play the game:
 
+- [itch.io](https://remarkablegames.itch.io/rhythmism)
 - [remarkablegames](https://remarkablegames.org/rhythmism/)
-- [Itch.io](https://remarkablegames.itch.io/rhythmism)
-- [Newgrounds](https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/918614)
+- [newgrounds](https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/918614)
 
 ## Background
 
-The game was made for the [Rhythm Jam 2024](https://itch.io/jam/rhythm-jam-2024), which the theme was `Divergence`:
+The game was made for the [Rhythm Jam 2024](https://itch.io/jam/rhythm-jam-2024), where the theme was `Divergence`:
 
 > a difference between two or more things, attitudes, or opinions.
 
 We brainstormed on [Excalidraw](https://excalidraw.com/#json=4xsd2WQeFiejrdBQkalCR,GLv9eoVsLsWhkXYKI1gCLA) and were inspired by [Friday Night Funkin'](https://friday-nightfunkin.io/) and [Guitar Hero](https://wikipedia.org/wiki/Guitar_Hero).
 
-The [proof of concept](https://replit.com/@remarkablemark/Rhythm-Game) showed that it was possible to make a rhythm game in [Kaboom](https://kaboomjs.com/). We then worked on the [MVP](https://replit.com/@remarkablemark/Rhythm-Jam-2024) before finishing it up on [GitHub](https://github.com/remarkablegames/rhythmism).
+I first created a proof of concept to see if it was possible to make a rhythm game in [Kaboom](https://kaboomjs.com/). After that, we migrated the code to [GitHub](https://github.com/remarkablegames/rhythmism).
 
 ## Credits