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refactor: tighten typography and copy across all product pages
Typography (components): - Overview.svelte: reduce body line-height (loose -> relaxed), constrain body max-width to --max-w-body, tighten body gap (xl -> lg), add border-bottom on lead to visually separate from body, add :global strong styling - PillarList.svelte: reduce pillar-desc line-height (1.8 -> relaxed), constrain max-width to --max-w-body, reduce row padding (4xl -> 3xl) Copy (Augmentum OS): - Overview body: 2 dense paragraphs -> 3 short scannable statements - All 4 pillar descriptions: broken into short declarative sentences Copy (Visage): - Overview body: clean up version number prose (v0.x -> 'current release') - All 4 pillar descriptions: tightened to shorter sentences Copy (Mr. Haven): - Overview body: second paragraph restructured into punchy declarative list - All 4 pillar descriptions: tightened
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src/lib/Overview.svelte

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font-size: var(--fs-lead);
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font-weight: var(--fw-bold);
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letter-spacing: var(--ls-tight);
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line-height: var(--lh-default);
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line-height: var(--lh-heading);
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color: var(--text-primary);
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text-shadow: 0 0 15px rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.1);
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padding-bottom: var(--space-xl);
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border-bottom: 1px solid var(--border);
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}
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.overview-body {
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display: flex;
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flex-direction: column;
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gap: var(--space-xl);
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gap: var(--space-lg);
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}
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:global(.overview-body p) {
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font-size: var(--fs-body);
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line-height: var(--lh-loose);
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font-size: var(--fs-body-sm);
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line-height: var(--lh-relaxed);
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color: var(--text-secondary);
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letter-spacing: var(--ls-default);
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max-width: var(--max-w-body);
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}
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:global(.overview-body strong) {
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color: var(--text-primary);
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font-weight: var(--fw-semibold);
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}
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.overview-stack {

src/lib/PillarList.svelte

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display: grid;
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grid-template-columns: 1fr 1fr;
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gap: var(--space-5xl);
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padding: var(--space-4xl) 0;
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padding: var(--space-3xl) 0;
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border-bottom: 1px solid var(--border);
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align-items: start;
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}
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.pillar-desc {
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font-size: var(--fs-body-sm);
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color: var(--text-secondary);
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line-height: 1.8;
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line-height: var(--lh-relaxed);
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letter-spacing: var(--ls-default);
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padding-top: var(--space-xs);
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max-width: var(--max-w-body);
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}
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@media (max-width: 768px) {

src/routes/augmentum/+page.svelte

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{
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label: 'COMMAND THE MACHINE. DON\'T NEGOTIATE WITH IT.',
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desc: 'Augmentum OS is built around a single principle: you are the operator, the system is the co-pilot. Issue commands by voice. Query your environment in natural language. Trigger workflows, interrogate processes, orchestrate tasks — the interface adapts to how you think. The entire command layer runs on local inference. Nothing is transcribed in the cloud. The UX is fast because the system is yours.',
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desc: 'You are the operator. The system is the co-pilot. Issue commands by voice, query your environment in natural language, trigger workflows — the interface adapts to how you think. The entire command layer runs on local inference. Nothing is sent to a cloud for transcription. The UX is fast because the system answers only to you.',
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},
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{
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num: '02',
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label: 'PRIVACY IS WHAT MAKES REAL CAPABILITY POSSIBLE.',
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desc: 'A system that phones home cannot be trusted as a command center. Augmentum\'s AI co-pilot runs entirely on your hardware — no telemetry, no behavioral profiles, no vendor with a copy of your activity. This is not a privacy feature bolted on after the fact. The architecture is local-first because local-first is the only way to give you genuine control. Intelligence without surveillance is not a tradeoff. It is the design.',
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desc: 'A system that phones home is not a command center. It is a managed endpoint. The AI co-pilot runs entirely on your hardware — no telemetry, no behavioral profiles, no vendor copy of your activity. Local-first is not a privacy feature. It is the architecture. Intelligence without surveillance is the design.',
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},
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{
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num: '03',
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label: 'SECURITY IS THE PERIMETER OF YOUR AUTHORITY.',
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desc: 'Access to your command infrastructure is governed by biometric authentication — Visage integrated at the OS level as a native primitive, not a plugin. Face verification happens via on-device ONNX inference. Your face never leaves your hardware. Sessions are scoped, privileges are gated, and every elevated action requires explicit authorization. Weak authentication is a hole in your perimeter. Augmentum does not have one.',
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desc: 'Access is governed by biometric authentication — Visage at the OS level, not a plugin. Face verification runs on-device via ONNX inference. Your biometrics never leave your hardware. Sessions are scoped. Privileges are gated. Every elevated action requires explicit authorization. Weak auth is a hole in your perimeter. Augmentum does not have one.',
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},
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{
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num: '04',
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label: 'THE STACK IS YOURS. FULLY AND WITHOUT EXCEPTION.',
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desc: 'The entire OS state is declared in a single reproducible configuration — version-controlled, auditable, rollback-capable. No silent updates. No background processes you did not authorize. No vendor lock-in. Clone your machine to new hardware in minutes. Every package, service, and setting answers to your config file. If you did not write it, it does not run.',
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desc: 'The entire OS state lives in one reproducible config — version-controlled, auditable, rollback-capable. No silent updates. No unauthorized background processes. Clone your machine to new hardware in minutes. Every package, service, and setting answers to your config file. If you did not write it, it does not run.',
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{specs}
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stackNote="<a href='/visage'>Visage</a> biometric authentication runs as a native OS primitive — not an app, not a plugin, not a third-party service. <a href='/mrhaven'>Mr. Haven</a> programmable asset control is wired directly into the operator layer. The full Sovren Stack is unified sovereign infrastructure."
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<p>Every operating system makes an implicit promise about who it serves. Most serve the vendor: they harvest telemetry, enforce update schedules you did not choose, and treat your machine as a managed endpoint in someone else's deployment. Augmentum OS makes a different promise.</p>
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<p>It is your command center. The interface is voice-native — you speak, the system responds, all inference runs locally. The access layer is biometric — your face, verified on-device, governs your sessions. The AI co-pilot surfaces context and executes tasks inside boundaries you define, with no data leaving the machine. And the entire OS is declarative — one config file, version-controlled, reproducible on any hardware. UX, privacy, and security do not trade off against each other here. Each one reinforces the others. That is the engineering commitment.</p>
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<p>Most operating systems serve the vendor. They harvest telemetry, push updates on their schedule, and treat your machine as a managed endpoint. Augmentum OS is built on the opposite premise.</p>
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<p>The interface is voice-native — speak a command, the system responds, all inference runs locally. Access is biometric — your face, verified on-device, governs your sessions. The AI co-pilot surfaces context and executes tasks inside boundaries you define, with no data leaving the machine. The entire OS is one declarative config — version-controlled, reproducible, rollback-capable.</p>
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<p>UX, privacy, and security do not trade off against each other. Each one reinforces the others. That is the engineering commitment.</p>
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</Overview>
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<PillarList {pillars} />

src/routes/mrhaven/+page.svelte

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{
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label: 'LOCK IT. SET THE RULES.',
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desc: 'Deposit USDC into a smart contract. Set a time-based schedule, an unlock date, or a recurring release. The contract enforces the rules — no humans in the loop, no approval required.',
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desc: 'Deposit USDC. Set a time-based schedule, an unlock date, or a recurring release. The contract enforces the rules — no humans in the loop, no approval required, no exceptions.',
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{
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label: 'IF YOU GO DARK, IT STILL EXECUTES.',
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desc: 'Set an inactivity threshold: if you go offline for X days, funds transfer automatically. An on-chain dead man\'s switch for the assets that matter most.',
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desc: 'Set an inactivity threshold. If you go offline for X days, funds transfer automatically to your named beneficiary. An on-chain dead man\'s switch for the assets that matter most.',
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},
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{
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num: '03',
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label: 'BUILT FOR AGENTS, NOT JUST HUMANS.',
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desc: 'Autonomous agents can hold funds, trigger transfers, and execute plans with the same non-custodial guarantees as any human user. No API key. No service account. The contract enforces the rules regardless of who calls it.',
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desc: 'Autonomous agents can hold funds, trigger transfers, and execute plans same non-custodial guarantees as any human. No API key. No service account. The contract enforces rules regardless of who calls it.',
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{
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label: 'SDK — COMING SOON.',
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desc: 'A developer SDK for integrating MrHaven vaults directly into applications and autonomous agent workflows. Programmatic vault creation, condition setting, and beneficiary management without touching the UI.',
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desc: 'Programmatic vault creation, condition setting, and beneficiary management without touching the UI. Direct integration into applications and autonomous agent workflows.',
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stackNote="Integrates with <a href='/augmentum'>Augmentum OS</a> as part of the Sovren Stack — programmable finance at the OS level. <a href='/visage'>Visage</a> identity is a first-class primitive."
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<p>Traditional financial institutions hold your assets on your behalf. They decide when you can access them, who can receive them, and under what conditions. MrHaven removes them from the equation entirely.</p>
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<p>Deployed on Base L2, MrHaven is a set of auditable smart contracts. Deposit USDC, define conditions, name beneficiaries — or designate autonomous agents as authorized recipients. The contract handles execution: autonomously, verifiably, permanently.</p>
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<p>Traditional institutions hold your assets on your behalf. They decide when you access them, who can receive them, and under what conditions. Mr. Haven removes them from the equation entirely.</p>
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<p>Deposit USDC. Define conditions. Name beneficiaries — or designate autonomous agents as recipients. The contract handles execution: autonomously, verifiably, permanently. No custodian. No intermediary. No exceptions.</p>
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src/routes/visage/+page.svelte

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label: 'YOUR BIOMETRICS STAY ON YOUR HARDWARE.',
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desc: 'Face recognition runs entirely on-device. No cloud enrollment. No biometric database. Your face never leaves your machine — not during setup, not during authentication, not ever.',
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desc: 'Face recognition runs entirely on-device. No cloud enrollment. No biometric database. Your face never leaves your machine — not during setup, not during auth, not ever.',
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label: 'DROPS INTO ANY LINUX AUTH STACK.',
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desc: 'Visage is a PAM module. It works with sudo, screen lock, and login without modifying your existing system configuration. If your system supports PAM, Visage works.',
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desc: 'Visage is a PAM module. Drop it into sudo, screen lock, or login without touching your existing config. If your system supports PAM, Visage works.',
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label: 'BUILT FOR IR. RESISTANT TO SPOOFING.',
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desc: 'Native support for Windows Hello-compatible IR cameras. Liveness detection is built in. Works in low light. Resistant to photo-based spoofing attacks.',
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desc: 'Native support for Windows Hello-compatible IR cameras. Liveness detection is built in. Works in low light. A photo does not unlock your machine.',
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label: 'UNDER ONE SECOND.',
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desc: 'The persistent daemon keeps the model resident — no cold start on every lock. Authentication finishes before your hand leaves the trackpad.',
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desc: 'The persistent daemon keeps the model resident in memory. No cold start on every auth. Authentication completes before your hand leaves the trackpad.',
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stackNote="Visage ships as a native identity primitive in <a href='/augmentum'>Augmentum OS</a>. It also integrates with <a href='/mrhaven'>Mr. Haven</a> for biometric-gated asset access."
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<p>Windows Hello has worked on Windows for years. Linux users were left out. Visage closes that gap — a native, open-source face authentication daemon built in Rust, with no external dependencies and no data leaving your hardware.</p>
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<p>v0.x is MIT-licensed and works on any Linux system. v2, in active development, integrates at the Augmentum OS identity layer — your face-verified credential becomes a system-level primitive, not just a PAM module.</p>
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<p>Windows Hello has worked on Windows for years. Linux users were left out. Visage closes that gap — open-source, built in Rust, no external dependencies, no data leaving your hardware.</p>
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<p>The current release is MIT-licensed and runs on any PAM-compatible Linux system. The next version integrates natively into Augmentum OS — your face-verified credential becomes a system-level primitive, not a PAM module bolted on from outside.</p>
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