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Merge pull request #7 from tinygodsdev/fix/unslop-text-audit
fix: remove em dashes and tighten copy (unslop audit)
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See exactly which word matches which across stacked lines. Add rows for glosses or IPA if
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you need them, click a word then its match on the line above or below, and export or share
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the diagramgreat for lessons, posts, or conlang notes.
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the diagram, great for lessons, posts, or conlang notes.
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<p class="mt-4 max-w-prose text-sm leading-relaxed text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-400">
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bitext/src/routes/about/+page.svelte

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<p class="mt-4 text-lg text-gray-600 dark:text-gray-400">
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<strong class="font-semibold text-gray-800 dark:text-gray-200">{DISPLAY_NAME}</strong> is a free,
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browser-based tool for drawing word-to-word and morpheme-to-morpheme links between stacked lines of
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text — for bilingual glosses, interlinear annotations, classroom handouts, and social posts. Everything
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text such as bilingual glosses, interlinear annotations, classroom handouts, and social posts. Everything
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runs in your browser; your sentences are not stored on our servers unless you choose to share them.
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</p>
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<h2 id="doc-partners" class={headingClass}>Partner links</h2>
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{DISPLAY_NAME} stays free and without aggressive ads. Hosting and ongoing upkeep still have a cost,
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so we add a few optional partner links - use them if you were already considering the service. It
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will help us keep the site running. The referral bonuses come from the provider. Here I recommend
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the services that I happily use myself.
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so I add a few optional partner links. Use them if you were already considering the service, it helps
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keep the site running. The referral bonuses come from the provider. These are services I use myself.
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</p>
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<div class="mt-5 flex min-w-0 flex-col gap-4">
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<PartnerBannerPreply />

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