Commit fed3817
docs(handoff): second copy polish pass on handoff pages
A senior-copywriter follow-up on commit b45a4e8. Focuses on terminology
consistency, list parallelism, active voice, and a few style-guide nits
caught on the second read.
index.mdx
- Frontmatter description: "Move an agent conversation between your
terminal and the cloud" -> "Move agent work between a local Warp
session and the cloud" so the description matches the body intro
(which Rachael's review moved to "local Warp session" terminology).
- "Directions of handoff" Local-to-cloud bullet: "more compute,
longer-running work, or to fan out variants in parallel" ->
"more compute, longer-running work, or parallel variants of the
same task". Now all three list items are parallel noun phrases.
- "Workspace state" bullet: "The cloud-to-local direction does not
currently apply" -> "doesn't currently apply" (contractions are
encouraged in the style guide for an approachable tone).
local-to-cloud.mdx
- "Use this handoff direction when:" list: first bullet started with
"The task is going to run for a long time..." while the other three
start with "You want...". Rewrote it to "You have a long-running
task and don't want to keep your laptop awake." so all four bullets
open the same way.
- Step 1: "trigger handoff with the `&` shortcut or the `/handoff`
slash command" -> "press `&` or run the `/handoff` slash command".
Direct verbs match the style guide pattern for keyboard / slash
commands.
- Step 2: "Pick the environment whose..." -> "Pick the one whose..."
(avoids repeating "environment" right after the bold header).
"create one first and add" -> "create one and add" ("first" was
doing no work).
- Post-steps prose: "After submission, the cloud agent applies your
workspace snapshot" -> "After you submit, the cloud agent...".
Active voice; readers don't talk about "submission."
- Troubleshooting (uncommitted changes): "Without it, the
conversation can't be forked" -> "Otherwise, the conversation can't
be forked". "Without it" had a fuzzy antecedent; "Otherwise" reads
cleanly off the preceding sentence.
cloud-to-cloud.mdx
- "Use this handoff direction when:" list: first bullet "A cloud
agent finished and you want to send a follow-up after the session
has ended." -> "You want to send a follow-up to a cloud agent
after its session has ended." Now parallel with the second bullet
("You want to continue an ambient agent run...").
- Cleaned up three lingering uses of "execution" that the earlier
internals scrub missed. All three were re-introduced when applying
Safia's audit-fix feedback in e4bdd4b. Replaced with "session":
- "the new execution runs on the same Git branch as the prior
session" -> "the new session continues on the same Git branch"
(avoids both the internal term and the "new ... prior" cycle).
- ":::caution Cloud-to-cloud handoff relies on a snapshot from
the prior execution" -> "...the prior session".
- "Click into the run to see the full transcript: each
execution appears in order, and you can scan the transcript to
see where one execution ended and the next began. Per-execution
timestamps aren't currently exposed in the API..." -> all three
"execution"s -> "session" / "Per-session".
- "What carries over" trailing sentence: "...proceeds with what it
could before continuing to your follow-up." -> "...rather than
starting over silently." Now parallel with the same sentence on
the other two handoff pages.
- "Sending a follow-up" lead-in: dropped the orphan third sentence
("Send-follow-up support is available in the Warp app.") and
folded it into the first: "you send a follow-up from the Warp app,
and the run continues."
- Step 2: "Type the next message into the conversation's input" ->
"Enter the next message in the conversation's input" ("Enter" is
the style guide's verb for text fields).
- Troubleshooting (old runs): "Start a new cloud agent run with the
prompt you want and reference the prior run in the prompt if
needed." -> "Start a new cloud agent run with the prompt you want,
referencing the prior run if needed." (drops the "prompt"
repetition).
Final grep over the handoff folder for "execution", "harness",
"spiraled", "right move", "Cloud Agents", "Warp terminal" -> zero hits.
Validation
- python3 .agents/skills/style_lint/style_lint.py --changed -> 0 issues.
- python3 .agents/skills/check_for_broken_links/check_links.py --internal-only
-> 0 broken links (2,439 internal links across 321 files).
Co-Authored-By: Oz <oz-agent@warp.dev>1 parent b45a4e8 commit fed3817
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